tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2269941892593521560.post6841416445701728440..comments2024-03-16T20:50:23.775-07:00Comments on Finally in First: Hamburger Paragraph Craft and Organizers GiveawayJenn Bateshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07726329343318475198noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2269941892593521560.post-62337570571872093212014-06-29T18:34:22.182-07:002014-06-29T18:34:22.182-07:00I remember being taught the hamburger model when I...I remember being taught the hamburger model when I was in elementary school! I think it is an easy way for writers to remember adding details is important :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09818233424059381697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2269941892593521560.post-15294191271512027752014-06-27T19:34:20.066-07:002014-06-27T19:34:20.066-07:00Definitely inspired to try it now!Definitely inspired to try it now!Amandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12811328685850733608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2269941892593521560.post-88105553749098458902014-06-27T18:34:31.375-07:002014-06-27T18:34:31.375-07:00Love the visual. I think the idea of bringing in ...Love the visual. I think the idea of bringing in a hamburger bun would be a good idea. Very interested.<br />cl14mentor@oh.rr.comCindy Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00934818350007533842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2269941892593521560.post-4642868071907072372014-06-27T04:17:23.151-07:002014-06-27T04:17:23.151-07:00Love this organizer. It's a great visual for t...Love this organizer. It's a great visual for the students.<br />Michelle.jaquillard@aol.comAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01752257717858277026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2269941892593521560.post-31662966085776340942014-06-27T01:12:50.940-07:002014-06-27T01:12:50.940-07:00I heard about this idea from a class I took one su...I heard about this idea from a class I took one summer but it was geared more towards junior high and high school students and I wasn't sure if it would work in the lower elementary, but I really like how you have laid it out. I think it would work nicely!Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289556106682844776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2269941892593521560.post-10989122712487755602014-06-26T20:10:33.630-07:002014-06-26T20:10:33.630-07:00I have not used this method, but feel this would b...I have not used this method, but feel this would be a great way to have them grow as writers!Rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03615954326286321140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2269941892593521560.post-11347590914041588142014-06-26T19:30:01.364-07:002014-06-26T19:30:01.364-07:00 I have verbally used this comparison, but I love ... I have verbally used this comparison, but I love your intro with the real bun!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01646568385052906244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2269941892593521560.post-60592165362310292582014-06-26T17:48:17.254-07:002014-06-26T17:48:17.254-07:00Love this graphic organizer! Can't wait to us...Love this graphic organizer! Can't wait to use it!<br />Darlene<br />jdsargo@sbcglobal.netDarlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18098716635063535143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2269941892593521560.post-82768578160514317682014-06-26T16:14:51.248-07:002014-06-26T16:14:51.248-07:00What a great graphic organizer. I like how student...What a great graphic organizer. I like how students can visualize their sentences using this organizer.<br />-Lovely Nina<br /><a href="http://lovelyninadesigns.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Lovely Nina Designs</a> <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15699359402927100305noreply@blogger.com